Good afternoon. kkk

2011-02-15 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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Hi there~ Good afternoon. I think you want to go to lunch early,right? Just kidding. I got enough sleep last night, so I'm full of energy. I early stoped learning Jazz dance and Pilates. Because that is not a job for me and it was hard for me to learn both. Now l'm learning to speak English by teacher Lei. You told me that online shopping have little accuracy. Most of doing online shopping fail to select the best dress. But my mom mostly gets its success. She has many online shopping, as she is always busy. Whenever she does online shopping, she almost gets a perfect fit for her. So, When I order something from online shopping, I always ask her. That's why I do online shopping, although it has little accuracy. And it's very convenience as i said before. enjoy your lunch! =)

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Hi [이름]! Me and my co-teacher are laughing as I check this composition. Actually I already had my brunch before our class. I usually eat it at 10:30 am. But anyways thank you so much for understanding. Enjoy your day [이름]. Great job with your sentences! Kudos!!! See you tomorrow. Lei J   Hi there~ Good afternoon. >>correct I think you want to go to lunch early,right? >>correct Just kidding. >>correct I got enough sleep last night, so I'm full of energy. >>correct I early stoped learning Jazz dance and Pilates. >>I stopped learning Jazz dance and Pilates early. Because that is not a job for me and it was hard for me to learn both. >>Because they were not the right job for me and it was hard to learn both. Now l'm learning to speak English by teacher Lei. >>Now I'm trying to speak English withteacher Lei. You told me that online shopping has little accuracy. >>correct Most of doing online shopping fail to select the best dress. >>Most people who do online shopping feail to select the best dress for them. But my mom mostly gets its success. >>But my mom is almost always successful. She does a lot of online shopping, as she is always busy. >>correct Whenever she does online shopping, she almost gets a perfect fit for her. >>correct So, When I order something from online shopping, I always ask her. >>So when I order something from the Internet, I always ask her opinion. That's why I do online shopping, although it has little accuracy. >>correct And it's very convenience as i said before. >>And it's very convenient as I told you earlier. enjoy your lunch! =) >>correct

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