good afternoon.lei~
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Hi [이름]!!
Wow, you've been studying so hard lately. That's good, but don't push yourself too much. Have some break as well. I am excited to hear the news about Kirsten and Robert. I'm a fan. Can't wait to hear about it!! See you later!!!
Lei :-0
Hi. this is [이름].~
>>correct^^
it's cloudy and hot day.
>>it's a cloudy yet a hot day today.
how about there?
>>how about in the Philippines?
yesterday, i told you i was going to see a movie.
>>correct^^
but, after our conversation, i back to my seat and i fell in fun with studying.
>>but after our conversation, I went back to my seat and I got engrosed studying.
i can't close my book.
>>correct^^
so i couldn't see a movie.
>>so I was not able to see the movie.
anyways, this morning, i watched the ophra winfrey show.
>>correct^^
the topic was about the eclipse and the twilight.
>>correct^^
Robert,christine and taylor were there.
>>correct^^
i watched it for my listening impovement.
>>I watched it to improve my listening skills.
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