good afternoon.lei~

2010-08-03 · 첨삭 강사 Shy

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Hi. this is [이름].~ it's cloudy and hot day. how about there? yesterday, i told you i was going to see a movie. but, after our conversation, i back to my seat and i fell in fun with studying. i can't close my book. so i couldn't see a movie. anyways, this morning, i watched oprha winfrey show. the topic was about the eclips and the twilight. Robert,christine and taylor were there. i watched it for my listening impovement.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!!

Wow, you've been studying so hard lately. That's good, but don't push yourself too much. Have some break as well. I am excited to hear the news about Kirsten and Robert. I'm a fan. Can't wait to hear about it!! See you later!!!

Lei :-0

Hi. this is [이름].~

>>correct^^
it's cloudy and hot day.
>>it's a cloudy yet a hot day today.

how about there?
>>how about in the Philippines?

yesterday, i told you i was going to see a movie.
>>correct^^

but, after our conversation, i back to my seat and i fell in fun with studying.

>>but after our conversation, I went back to my seat and I got engrosed studying.

i can't close my book.
>>correct^^

so i couldn't see a movie.
>>so I was not able to see the movie.

anyways, this morning, i watched the ophra winfrey show.
>>correct^^

the topic was about the eclipse and the twilight.

>>correct^^

Robert,christine and taylor were there.
>>correct^^

i watched it for my listening impovement.

>>I watched it to improve my listening skills.

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