Good afternoon~ Ms.charry.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there Ms. [이름]!
Congratulations for having a new notebook computer! kkk.
Don\'t worry. Your secret is safe with me! ^_~
Just don\'t bring the notebook computer at home because your husband might see it. Haha!
Anyhow, enjoy your new computer.
You deserve it for working hard all the time. ^^
See you tomorrow. :)
~Teacher Charry
Hi.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Hi there!
this letter is second one. kkk
>> This letter is the second one. kkk
Ms.charry~ I bough a notebook~~ Wow~~
>> Ms. [Name], I bought a notebook computer. Wow!
I have a personal computer in the office.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> In the office, I have a personal computer.
but as you may know, my company is financial company to handle customer\'s data.
>> But as you may know, my company is a financial company and we handle a customer\'s data.
It has security programs.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> The company has security programs.
That\'s why I can use only to task by my pc.
>> That\'s why I can only use my PC for my task.
So I really need to buy a notbook.
>> So, I really need to buy a notebook (computer).
but It\'s secret to my husband. kkk
>> But it\'s a secret from my husband. kkk
Notebook is very expensive for me.
>> The notebook (computer) is very expensive for me.
When he knows about it. he complains it ^^;;;
>> When he finds out about it, he will complain. ^^;;;
Please keep this secret. ^^
>> Please keep this a secret. ^^
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