good afternoon, Ms.Shy~
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This is an alarm clock.
I don't have it because I use my celluar phone for waking-up bell.
I set the waking-up time at eight thirty A.M.
I can't get up right away so I have very little time to have a breakfast.
Every morning I feel very hungry but I can't have anything.
I hurry up to go to my working place.
As I get to my clinic, I have to work immediately
so I still can't have anything to eat.
How bad I am and my husband is.
How nice my husband. But he may have time to eat something in his working place.
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Good afternoon Ms. [Name]!
I have the same situation as you, actually. I don’t usually eat breakfast because I wake up late so I just eat lunch..
But sometimes, I make it a point to eat in the morning even just a piece of bread so that I can work properly.. It’s hard to work with an empty stomach..^^See you in class!!
T. Shy
This is an alarm clock.>> CorrectI don't have it because I use my celluar phone for waking-up bell.>> I don't have it because I use my cellular phone as an alarm
I set the waking-up time at eight thirty A.M.
>> Correct>> I set the alarm at eight thirty A.M. (better)I can't get up right away so I have very little time to have a breakfast.>> CorrectEvery morning I feel very hungry but I can't have anything.>> CorrectI hurry up to go to my working place.>> CorrectAs I get to my clinic, I have to work immediately so I still can't have anything to eat.>> CorrectHow bad I am and my husband is. >> How bad it is for my husband and me.
How nice my husband. But he may have time to eat something in his working place.
>> How nice it is for my husband, but he may have time to eat something in his working place.
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