good afternoon, Ms.Shy~

At the clinic I give medical treatment to patients about dermatologic problems. Most of the problems are acne scars, acne, wrinkles, lifting up and plastic surgery. I provide many different laser treatments. Of course the price of treatments is very expensive, but they really want to take those treatments cause they eager to be more beautiful and to look younger. I enjoy my job for consulting and providing procedures. Nowsdays I try to get plastic surgery technique so I study about it with my colleague doctors. My working clinic is a network-clinic. Each clinic in different areas has two or three doctors in it. So there are about thirty doctors in it. It is good environment to study or have a seminar. As a pay-doctor, I have to work harder but I like woking in here.

Hello Ms. [Name]!

You actually do have a really good job, especially now that cosmetic surgeries and enhancement procedures are really popular among women..

My mom had a cosmetic surgery.. She had a nose job and had her eyes be deep-set.. I could never go through surgeries like that.. I have very low tolerance with pain..

See you!

Shy

At the clinic I give medical treatment to patients about dermatologic problems.

>> Correct
Most of the problems are acne scars, acne, wrinkles, lifting up and plastic surgery.

>> Correct
I provide many different laser treatments. 

>> Correct
Of course the price of treatments is very expensive, 

>> Of course the price of treatments are very expensive
but they really want to take those treatments cause they eager to be more beautiful and to look younger.

>> but they really want to take those treatments because they are eager to be more beautiful and to look younger.
I enjoy my job for consulting and providing procedures.

>> I enjoy my job entertaining consultations and providing procedures.
Nowsdays I try to get plastic surgery technique so I study about it with my colleague doctors.

>> Nowadays I try to get plastic surgery technique so I study about it with my colleagues

>> Nowadays I try to get plastic surgery technique so I study about it with my fellow doctors.
My working clinic is a network-clinic.

>> Correct
Each clinic in different areas has two or three doctors in it.

>> Correct
So there are about thirty doctors in it.

>> Correct
It is good environment to study or have a seminar.

>> It is a good environment to study or have a seminar.

>> It is an ideal environment to study or have a seminar.
As a pay-doctor, I have to work harder but I like woking in here.

>> As a paid doctor, I have to work harder but I like working in here.