Good afternoon Nina!

2014-02-18 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Hi Nina! Yes. I go to acupuncture clinics sometimes. because specific symtoms is working like sprain symtoms. I think many korean people use the acupuncture clinics as additional treatment. It is still a controversail issue between traditional medicine and western medicine.

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Hello good afternoon [이름]! Wow! Thank you very much for sending this in today.^^ I really appreciate your effort and time. I know that you are busy but still you did your homework. You deserve a round of applause!  Keep it up! I\'d like you to go over the corrections below for your improvement. I tried acupuncture too. It was great! See you tomorrow! Have a great day! Take Care!Teacher Nina   Hi Nina!>> Correct! >> OR: Hi Nina.Yes. I go to acupuncture clinics sometimes. >> Yes, I sometimes go to an acupuncture clinic. because specific symtoms is working like sprain symtoms.>> It\'s because its working like for sprain. I think many korean people use the acupuncture clinics as additional treatment. >> I think many Korena people go to acupuncture clinics as an additional treatment. It is still a controversail issue between traditional medicine and western medicine. >> There is still a controversial issue between traditional and western medicine. >> OR: Traditional and western medicine is still a controversial issue these days.

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