Good afternoon Nina!
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Nina!
Yes. I go to acupuncture clinics sometimes. because specific symtoms is working
like sprain symtoms.
I think many korean people use the acupuncture clinics as additional treatment.
It is still a controversail issue between traditional medicine and western
medicine.
강사 첨삭
Hello good afternoon [이름]!
Wow! Thank you very much for sending this in today.^^
I really appreciate your effort and time. I know that you are busy but still you did your homework.
You deserve a round of applause! Keep it up!
I\'d like you to go over the corrections below for your improvement.
I tried acupuncture too. It was great! See you tomorrow!
Have a great day! Take Care!Teacher Nina
Hi Nina!>> Correct!
>> OR: Hi Nina.Yes. I go to acupuncture clinics sometimes.
>> Yes, I sometimes go to an acupuncture clinic.
because specific symtoms is working like sprain symtoms.>> It\'s because its working like for sprain.
I think many korean people use the acupuncture clinics as additional treatment. >> I think many Korena people go to acupuncture clinics as an additional treatment. It is still a controversail issue between traditional medicine and western medicine.
>> There is still a controversial issue between traditional and western medicine.
>> OR: Traditional and western medicine is still a controversial issue these days.
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