Good afternoon! Nina

2014-02-25 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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It's happy Tuesday. I had surprise experience today. I found a deer when took work after lunch. It was so cute and fast. haha. Anyway, This event made me feel better because i got stress from work in the morning. take care! Nina.

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]! Thank you for sharing this experience with me. It\'s nice to hear that you feel better now. Always find time to relax at work. Take a break too. Can\'t wait to hear your ideas in class. See you tomorrow! Take Care Always! Have a nice day! Kindly go over the corrections below. Teacher Nina   It\'s happy Tuesday.>> It\'s a happy Tuesday. I had surprise experience today.>> I had a suprising experience today.I found a deer when took work after lunch. >> I found a deer when I went to work after lunch.>> OR: I found a deer when I was on my way back to work. It was so cute and fast. haha. >> Correct >> OR: It was fast and it was really cute. Anyway, This event made me feel better because i got stress from work in the morning. >> Anyway, the situation made me feel bettter because I was stressed at work this morning. >> OR: Anyway, the situation made me feel better after I was stressed at work this morning.take care! Nina. >> Correct! (Check: Capitalization ^^.) >> OR: Take Care Nina!

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