Good afternoon! Nina
학생이 쓴 원문
It's happy Tuesday.
I had surprise experience today.
I found a deer when took work after lunch. It was so cute and fast. haha.
Anyway, This event made me feel better because i got stress from work in the
morning.
take care! Nina.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]!
Thank you for sharing this experience with me.
It\'s nice to hear that you feel better now.
Always find time to relax at work. Take a break too.
Can\'t wait to hear your ideas in class. See you tomorrow!
Take Care Always! Have a nice day!
Kindly go over the corrections below.
Teacher Nina
It\'s happy Tuesday.>> It\'s a happy Tuesday. I had surprise experience today.>> I had a suprising experience today.I found a deer when took work after lunch.
>> I found a deer when I went to work after lunch.>> OR: I found a deer when I was on my way back to work.
It was so cute and fast. haha.
>> Correct
>> OR: It was fast and it was really cute. Anyway, This event made me feel better because i got stress from work in the morning.
>> Anyway, the situation made me feel bettter because I was stressed at work this morning.
>> OR: Anyway, the situation made me feel better after I was stressed at work this morning.take care! Nina.
>> Correct! (Check: Capitalization ^^.)
>> OR: Take Care Nina!
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