Good afternoon! Nina
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강사 첨삭
Good day to you!
Thank you for sharing this with me.
I wanted to be a doctor too when I was young.
Tell me more about this if we have time in class.
I do have some corrections so you can express yourself better.
I hope you will go over them. Take Care!
Teacher Nina.
It\'s such a lovely day.
>> Correct
I\'m worry about the fine dust but it\'s a sunny day.
>> I\'m worried about the fine dust but it\'s a sunny day.
When i was a young girl, i wanted to be a doctor.
>> When I was a young girl, I wanted to be a doctor.^^
I watched a medical drama and i thought doctor is so attractive job.
>> I watched a medical drama and I thought being a doctor is such an attractive job.^^
But i didn\'t study very hard so i gave up.
>> But I didn\'t study very hard so I had to give it up. T,T
I think it was a good decision because doctors always see the paticent.
>> I think it was a good decision because doctors always see patients.
That is awuful thing.
>> That is an awful thing.
I want to meet a happy person every day.
>> Correct^^
Take care. Nina.
>> Correct
See you tonight!
>> Correct
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