good afternoon Shy~

2010-07-27 · 첨삭 강사 Shy

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In theses days, I'm interested in musical instrument, acoustic guitar or ukulele specially. There are so many pretty designed guitars or ukuleles. For example pink color, blue sky color, sculpturing one ect. I'd like to have an ukulele. It's a Hawaiian traditional instrument. It sounds like a guitar, but the smaller than a guitar. Do you know this instrument? ^&^ Tomorrow is my off day so I'll go to musical instrument market for buying beautiful one.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon too Ms. [Name]! Yeah, I have seen Ukulele before and I think its cute..^^Are you going to learn how to play Ukulele? That sounds nice! I hope I can hear you play.. T. Shy   In theses days, I'm interested in musical instrument, acoustic guitar or ukulele specially. >> Theses days, I'm interested in musical instrument, especially acoustic guitar or ukulele. There are so many pretty designed guitars or ukuleles. >> There are so many pretty designs of guitars or ukuleles.For example pink color, blue sky color, sculpturing one ect. >> For example pink color, sky blue color, sculptured one etc.I'd like to have an ukulele.  >> I'd like to have a ukulele. It's a Hawaiian traditional instrument. >> Correct^^It sounds like a guitar, but the smaller than a guitar. >> It sounds like a guitar, but it’s smaller than a guitar.Do you know this instrument? ^&^ >> Correct^^Tomorrow is my off day so I'll go to musical instrument market for buying beautiful one.>> Tomorrow is my day off so I'll go to a musical instrument market to buy a beautiful one.

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