good afternoon teacher
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강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
I never thought that you are a sports-minded person.
Why not practice soccer on weekends?
Invite and encourage your family to go with you.
Anyway, en[이름] the rest of your winter vacation!
Have fun!
~Teacher Chloe
Today I\'ll tell you about my favorite sport.
>>Today, I am going to tell you about my favorite sport.
My favorite sport is baseball,bowling,soccer.
>>My favorite sports are baseball, bowling, and soccer.
I am very good at baseball but I not good at bowling and soccer.
>>I am only very good at baseball.
OR:
>>I am very good at baseball but not at bowling and soccer.
I am practicing bowling every Wednesday with my family.
>>I practice bowling on Wednesdays with my family.
My dad is very good at bowling.
>>Correct!
My mom is good at bowling too but my dad is better than my mom.
>>Correct!
BETTER:
>>My mom is good at bowling too but my dad is better.
I want to practice soccer too but I have no time.
>>I want to practice soccer but I don\'t have much time for it.
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