good afternoon teacher

2017-01-11 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

학생이 쓴 원문

Today I'll tell you about my favorite sport. My favorite sport is baseball,bowling,soccer. I am very good at baseball but I not good at bowling and soccer. I am practicing bowling every Wednesday with my family. My dad is very good at bowling. My mom is good at bowling too but my dad is better than my mom. I want to practice soccer too but I have no time.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!

I never thought that you are a sports-minded person.

Why not practice soccer on weekends?

Invite and encourage your family to go with you.

Anyway, en[이름] the rest of your winter vacation!

Have fun!

~Teacher Chloe

Today I\'ll tell you about my favorite sport. 

>>Today, I am going to tell you about my favorite sport.                                          
My favorite sport is baseball,bowling,soccer. 

>>My favorite sports are baseball, bowling, and soccer.                                    
I am very good at baseball but I not good at bowling and soccer. 

>>I am only very good at baseball. 

OR:
>>I am very good at baseball but not at bowling and soccer.                      
I am practicing bowling every Wednesday with my family. 

>>I practice bowling on Wednesdays with my family.                              
My dad is very good at bowling. 

>>Correct!                                                       
My mom is good at bowling too but my dad is better than my mom. 

>>Correct!
BETTER: 

>>My mom is good at bowling too but my dad is better.                       
I want to practice soccer too but I have no time.

>>I want to practice soccer but I don\'t have much time for it.

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