good afternoon teacher~!

2017-01-19 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Good afternoon teacher~!:) Today i will write a composition before our class These day i am really fall in love with drama named 'Goblin' Do you know Descendants of the Sun? Goblin writers are the same with descendants of the sun. That's why i always watch this drama But this drama is almost over I am really sad How can i live with out goblin Main character is really handsome Have you heard about gong yu? He is really handsome His age is 39 years old But he look like 33~35 and all most of people in Korea like him:) Now i have to go:) see you later~! PS. today i will have a class with my brother He is also a student in power english Please well come him:) love you teahcer

강사 첨삭

Hi there my dear [이름]!
Thank you for always so enthusiastic, active and animated in our class.

I always I appreciate your effort in doing so.

I can\'t wait to hear your voice again.

Take care and have a great day!

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

Good afternoon teacher~!:)

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 Today i will write a composition before our class

>>correct
 These day i am really fall in love with drama named \'Goblin\'

>>These days I really fell in love with the drama entitled The Goblin.
 Do you know Descendants of the Sun?

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OR: Are you familiar with the Descendants of the Sun?
 Goblin writers are the same with descendants of the sun.

>>correct

OR: The makers of the Goblin is the same with the Descendants of the Sun.
 That\'s why i always watch this drama

>>correct
 But this drama is almost over

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 I am really sad How can i live with out goblin

>>I am really sad thinking how can I survive without The Goblin.
 Main character is really handsome

>>The main character is really handsome.

OR: The lead actor is really handsome.
 Have you heard about gong yu?

>>correct
 He is really handsome

>>correct
 His age is 39 years old

>>correct
 But he look like 33~35 and all most of people in Korea like him:) 

>>But he looks around 33 to 35 and most people in Korea like him.
 Now i have to go:) see you later~!
>>correct
 PS. today i will have a class with my brother 

>>correct
 He is also a student in power English

>>correct

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