good afternoon teacher~!
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강사 첨삭
Hi there my dear [이름]!
Thank you for always so enthusiastic, active and animated in our class.
I always I appreciate your effort in doing so.
I can\'t wait to hear your voice again.
Take care and have a great day!
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Good afternoon teacher~!:)
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Today i will write a composition before our class
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These day i am really fall in love with drama named \'Goblin\'
>>These days I really fell in love with the drama entitled The Goblin.
Do you know Descendants of the Sun?
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OR: Are you familiar with the Descendants of the Sun?
Goblin writers are the same with descendants of the sun.
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OR: The makers of the Goblin is the same with the Descendants of the Sun.
That\'s why i always watch this drama
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But this drama is almost over
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I am really sad How can i live with out goblin
>>I am really sad thinking how can I survive without The Goblin.
Main character is really handsome
>>The main character is really handsome.
OR: The lead actor is really handsome.
Have you heard about gong yu?
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He is really handsome
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His age is 39 years old
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But he look like 33~35 and all most of people in Korea like him:)
>>But he looks around 33 to 35 and most people in Korea like him.
Now i have to go:) see you later~!
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PS. today i will have a class with my brother
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He is also a student in power English
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