Good afternoon teacher~!

2017-01-23 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Good afternoon teacher~! Happy saturday!! You told me that you have to house chores on the weekend You will be really busy~! Anyway we talked about the generation gap yesterday. I found disadvantage disadvantage 1.When i talk with my parents or grandparents i feel generation gap between us They don't understand what i mean 2. When i go to store with them. we have diffrent type of the cloth 3. When we go to the Karaoke Room (Singing Room) i have to sing their type I think their is no advantage for the generation gap Now this is for my homework Today is the last day for watching 'GOBLIN' This is really perfect drama I have to go now! See you tomorrow teacher~!:) Love you teacher~!

강사 첨삭

Wow!!What can I say!? You are indeed a very good student! You are not just a very good speaker but a very good writer too.

I hope you will keep up the good work..

I am also looking forward to watching the GOBLIN ahahah!
Take care baby! I love you!

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

Good afternoon teacher~!

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 Happy saturday!!

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 You told me that you have to house chores on the weekend

>>You told me that you have to do some house chores on the weekend.
 You will be really busy~!

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 Anyway we talked about the generation gap yesterday.

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 I found disadvantage

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 disadvantage 

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 1.When i talk with my parents or grandparents i feel generation gap between us

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 They don\'t understand what i mean 

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 2. When i go to store with them. we have diffrent type of the cloth

>>When I go to the store with them we like different types of clothes.
 3. When we go to the Karaoke Room (Singing Room) i have to sing their type 

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 I think their is no advantage for the generation gap

>>I think there is no advantage for the generation gap.
 Now this is for my homework 

>>correct
 Today is the last day for watching \'GOBLIN\'

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 This is really perfect drama

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 I have to go now!

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 See you tomorrow teacher~!:)

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 Love you teacher~!

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