Good afternoon, teacher~!

2017-01-26 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Good afternoon, teacher~! I can't see you tomorrow:( I will miss you so much~! Anyway we talked about the advertisement Like i said before the most advertisement product is alchol, car, and some other food But i think we shouldn't allow advertising alchol It can give a bad effect to the teenager:( I didn't exactly tell you about cigarette We don't allow to advertise cigarette I don't know why, but this advertisement disappear when i was young nowdays we advertisement the 'No smoking' It's really hard to tell you;;kkk i have to go now Please have a great time with your family and have a great holiday Love you teacher cammile~! See you on the monday!:)

강사 첨삭

Hi baby good day to you!
Thank you for always being so active, smart and enthusiastic in our class.

You have no idea how happy and excited I am to have been taking the class with you everyday...

I will surely miss you baby but I want you to spend your time with your family and loved ones okay...^^

Take care always and have a Happy New Year!

I love you baby!

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

Good afternoon, teacher~!

>>correct
 I can\'t see you tomorrow:(

>>I will not be able to see you tomorrow.
 I will miss you so much~!

>>correct
 Anyway we talked about the advertisement

>>correct
 Like i said before the most advertisement product is alchol, car, and some other food

>>Like I sad before, most products that are advertised are alcohol, car and some other food.
 But i think we shouldn\'t allow advertising alchol

>>But I think we shouldn\'t allow alcohol to be advertised.
 It can give a bad effect to the teenager:(

>>correct

OR: They have bead effects mostly to teenagers.
 I didn\'t exactly tell you about cigarette

>>correct
 We don\'t allow to advertise cigarette

>>correct

OR: We don\'t allow advertising cigarettes.
 I don\'t know why, but this advertisement disappear when i was young nowdays we advertisement the \'No smoking\'

>>I don\'t know why but the said ads regarding cigarettes disappeared when I was young and nowadays they only put signage stating No Smoking.
 It\'s really hard to tell you;;kkk

>>correct
 i have to go now

>>correct
 Please have a great time with your family and have a great holiday

>>correct
 Love you teacher cammile~!

>>correct
 See you on the monday!:)

>>correct

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