Good afternoon, teacher~!
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Hi baby good day to you!
Thank you for always being so active, smart and enthusiastic in our class.
You have no idea how happy and excited I am to have been taking the class with you everyday...
I will surely miss you baby but I want you to spend your time with your family and loved ones okay...^^
Take care always and have a Happy New Year!
I love you baby!
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Good afternoon, teacher~!
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I can\'t see you tomorrow:(
>>I will not be able to see you tomorrow.
I will miss you so much~!
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Anyway we talked about the advertisement
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Like i said before the most advertisement product is alchol, car, and some other food
>>Like I sad before, most products that are advertised are alcohol, car and some other food.
But i think we shouldn\'t allow advertising alchol
>>But I think we shouldn\'t allow alcohol to be advertised.
It can give a bad effect to the teenager:(
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OR: They have bead effects mostly to teenagers.
I didn\'t exactly tell you about cigarette
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We don\'t allow to advertise cigarette
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OR: We don\'t allow advertising cigarettes.
I don\'t know why, but this advertisement disappear when i was young nowdays we advertisement the \'No smoking\'
>>I don\'t know why but the said ads regarding cigarettes disappeared when I was young and nowadays they only put signage stating No Smoking.
It\'s really hard to tell you;;kkk
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i have to go now
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Please have a great time with your family and have a great holiday
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Love you teacher cammile~!
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See you on the monday!:)
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