Good afternoon teacher~!

2017-03-14 · 첨삭 강사 camille

학생이 쓴 원문

Good afternoon~!, teacher It was really good to talk with you~! Now my brother arrived from school He looks happy:) He won the election I was really happy that he won But i am little worry about my cousin He will feel sad. Any way my brother thanked me Because i helped him a lot You know i am president of school so i know how to be a school president First i made a poster i put the picture of him and name also promise Next i helped him to how to speech well He followed me very well Actully i know that he will win the vote Now i have to go bye see you tomorrow~!

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon my dear [이름]!
Thank you so much for having the class with you today.

It\'s always a pleasure talking with you!
And yes! Congratulations to your brother! I knew he will win the election...

I am sure he will become a very school president just like you.

Take care always and have a great day!

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

Good afternoon~!, teacher

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It was really good to talk with you~!

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Now my brother arrived from school

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OR: Now my brother has arrived home from school.

He looks happy:)

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He won the election

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I was really happy that he won

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But i am little worry about my cousin

>>But I am a bit worried about my cousin.

He will feel sad.

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Any way my brother thanked me

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Because i helped him a lot

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You know i am president of school so i know how to be a school president

>>You know that I am the president of our school too so I know how to become a school president.

First i made a poster i put the picture of him and name also promise

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Next i helped him to how to speech well

>>Next I helped him how to face the people for his speech.

He followed me very well

>>CORRECT

Actully i know that he will win the vote

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OR: Actually I am expecting him to win the election.

Now i have to go bye see you tomorrow~!

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