Good afternoon teacher~!
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강사 첨삭
Good afternoon my dear [이름]!
Thank you so much for having the class with you today.
It\'s always a pleasure talking with you!
And yes! Congratulations to your brother! I knew he will win the election...
I am sure he will become a very school president just like you.
Take care always and have a great day!
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Good afternoon~!, teacher
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It was really good to talk with you~!
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Now my brother arrived from school
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OR: Now my brother has arrived home from school.
He looks happy:)
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He won the election
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I was really happy that he won
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But i am little worry about my cousin
>>But I am a bit worried about my cousin.
He will feel sad.
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Any way my brother thanked me
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Because i helped him a lot
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You know i am president of school so i know how to be a school president
>>You know that I am the president of our school too so I know how to become a school president.
First i made a poster i put the picture of him and name also promise
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Next i helped him to how to speech well
>>Next I helped him how to face the people for his speech.
He followed me very well
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Actully i know that he will win the vote
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OR: Actually I am expecting him to win the election.
Now i have to go bye see you tomorrow~!
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