good afternoon teacher.

2017-03-23 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Hello teacher. Today I will tell you about my friends. I have many friends and I have 5 best friends. Four of them is nice but one of them bad. We alwayse walk together eat, lunch together, go to be bathroom togeher and play baseball or soccer together. And I like it because it is very fun. Because of my friends I like going school. My friends are or nice but they are not good at studying. And they are very stupid. But they are good at sports. One of them is stupid and not good at sports but he is very nice.

강사 첨삭

Hi there baby! Thank you so much for doing great!

I am so happy that you are doing great always. Please keep up the good work baby

I am looking forward to having the class with you again baby..

Take care always...

Have a good night...

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

Hello teacher.

>>correct
 Today I will tell you about my friends.

>>correct
 I have many friends and I have 5 best friends.

>>correct
 Four of them is nice but one of them bad.

>>Four of them are nice but one is bad.
 We alwayse walk together eat, lunch together, go to be bathroom togeher

>>We always walk together, eat lunch together and go to the toilet together.
 and play baseball or soccer together.

>>correct
 And I like it because it is very fun.

>>correct
 Because of my friends I like going school.

>>Because of my friends I like going to school.
 My friends are or nice but they are not good at studying.

>>correct
 And they are very stupid.

>>correct
 But they are good at sports.

>>correct
 One of them is stupid and not good at sports but he is very nice.

>>correct

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