Good afternoon teacher
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강사 첨삭
Hi baby thank you for doing your homework...
I really appreciate your effort.
I can\'t wait to hear your voice again...
Take care and have a great day!
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Good afternoon~!
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I have to write a one more ..
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because i didn\'t do it before
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Anyway i will just do my homework..
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Writing task!
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If you could write a song, what would it be about?
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What would be the genre?
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If i write a song i want to make a love story song
>>If I will write a song I will make a love song.
Because i want to make other happy
>>Because I want to make other people happy.
my song genre will be ballad
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I am really exciting!!
>>I am really excited.
I want my favorite boy band BTS can sing this song for me !!!
>>I want my favorite boy band BTS to sing this song for me.
That make me really happy:)
>>That makes me really happy.
Now i have to go now:(((( see you on the class~!
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