Good afternoon teacher

2017-05-30 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Good afternoon~! I have to write a one more .. because i didn't do it before Anyway i will just do my homework.. Writing task! If you could write a song, what would it be about? What would be the genre? If i write a song i want to make a love story song Because i want to make other happy my song genre will be ballad I am really exciting!! I want my favorite boy band BTS can sing this song for me !!! That make me really happy:) Now i have to go now:(((( see you on the class~!

강사 첨삭

Hi baby thank you for doing your homework...

I really appreciate your effort.

I can\'t wait to hear your voice again...

Take care and have a great day!

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

Good afternoon~!

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 I have to write a one more ..

>>correct
 because i didn\'t do it before

>>correct
 Anyway i will just do my homework..

>>correct
 Writing task!

>>correct
 If you could write a song, what would it be about? 

>>correct
 What would be the genre?

>>correct
 If i write a song i want to make a love story song

>>If I will write a song I will make a love song.
 Because i want to make other happy

>>Because I want to make other people happy.
 my song genre will be ballad

>>correct
 I am really exciting!!

>>I am really excited.
 I want my favorite boy band BTS can sing this song for me !!!

>>I want my favorite boy band BTS to sing this song for me.
 That make me really happy:)

>>That makes me really happy.
 Now i have to go now:(((( see you on the class~!

>>correct

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