Good afternoon teacher~!
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강사 첨삭
Hi baby!
Thank you for sending this in.
I can\'t wait to see you again..
Take care and have good night.,.
xoxoTeacer Ca^^
Hello teacher~!!!
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Today I will tell you about my day.
>>correct
Today I went to school and I read a book at the library.
>>correct
And I go out side with my friends and we pick up the trash.
>>We went outside with my friends and picked up trash.
It was too hard.
>>correct
And I play with my friends.
>>I also played with my friends.
We played baseball It was very fun.
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And we played soccer It was not fun.
>>We played soccer but it was not fun.
My team win the all of the game.
>>My team won the game.
And today I studyed math, korean, english and P.E. It was very fun today.
>>I also studied Math, Korean, English and PE. It was very fun!
When school was over I play baseball and soccer with my friends.
>>I played soccer and baseball with my friends after school.
My team lose a base ball but our team win the soccer.
>>My team lost the baseball game but we won the soccer match.
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