Good afternoon teacher~!

2017-06-01 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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Hello teacher~!!! Today I will tell you about my day. Today I went to school and I read a book at the library. And I go out side with my friends and we pick up the trash. It was too hard. And I play with my friends. We played baseball It was very fun. And we played soccer It was not fun. My team win the all of the game. And today I studyed math, korean, english and P.E. It was very fun today. When school was over I play baseball and soccer with my friends. My team lose a base ball but our team win the soccer.

강사 첨삭

Hi baby!
Thank you for sending this in.

I can\'t wait to see you again..

Take care and have good night.,.

xoxoTeacer Ca^^

Hello teacher~!!! 

>>correct

Today I will tell you about my day. 

>>correct

Today I went to school and I read a book at the library.

>>correct

And I go out side with my friends and we pick up the trash.

>>We went outside with my friends and picked up trash.

It was too hard. 

>>correct                                                 
And I play with my friends. 

>>I also played with my friends.

 We played baseball It was very fun. 

>>correct

 And we played soccer It was not fun. 

>>We played soccer but it was not fun.

My team win the all of the game. 

>>My team won the game.

And today I studyed math, korean, english and P.E. It was very fun today.

>>I also studied Math, Korean, English and PE. It was very fun!

When school was over I play baseball and soccer with my friends.

>>I played soccer and baseball with my friends after school.

My team lose a base ball but our team win the soccer.

>>My team lost the baseball game but we won the soccer match.

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