Good afternoon teacher Carmen!

2016-02-19 · 첨삭 강사 Carmen

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: 1. Choose the sentence in past progressive A. I am listening music 2. What's the past participle of Write? A. Wrote 3. I met him on the street about two weeks____. C. ago 4. What's the correct past form of "visit"? B. Visited 5. Complete the sentence using comparative form: Helen is younger than Mary. -- Oh my gosh, I receive your photos by e-mail right now!!! Actually your office manager sent me your photos on last Monday, but I didn't know that. Haha. You are always pretty! Oh my god Bogart!!! How cute he is!!! I assure that there are no one else who dosen't love him. Your sister and mother are so pretty too!! And how wonderful your country's sea it is! I want to go to the sea where is near by my hometown. If I have a chance, I will send you more pictures of mine and my mother's soon! Thank you for share your photos! And see you later!

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Hi [이름]! I would like to commend you for a job well done! I know soon you will be really fluent in English, both oral and written. So just keep it up! Study harder!   Teacher Carmen ^^   HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:1. Choose the sentence in past progressiveA. I am listening music>> D. I was listening music2. What\'s the past participle of Write?A. Wrote>> D. Written3. I met him on the street about two weeks____.C. ago>> Correct!4. What\'s the correct past form of \"visit\"?B. Visited>> Correct!5. Complete the sentence using comparative form:Helen is younger than Mary.>> Correct!--Oh my gosh, I receive your photos by e-mail right now!!! >> Oh my gosh! I already received your photos in my e-mail right now!! Actually your office manager sent me your photos on last Monday, but I didn\'t know that. Haha. >>Actually, your manager sent me your photos last Monday, but I didn\'t know that. Haha. You are always pretty! >> Correct! Oh my god Bogart!!! >> Oh my god! Bogart!! How cute he is!!! >> He is so cute!! I assure that there are no one else who dosen\'t love him. >> I am sure that there is no one who doesn\'t love him. Your sister and mother are so pretty too!! >> Correct! And how wonderful your country\'s sea it is! >> It is so wonderful to see what the sea looks like in your country. I want to go to the sea where is near by my hometown. >> I want to go to the beach near my hometown. If I have a chance, I will send you more pictures of mine and my mother\'s soon! >> If I have a chance, I will send you more pictures of me and my mother soon! Thank you for share your photos! >> Thank you for sharing your photos! And see you later! >> Correct!  

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