Good and bad experiences with sports at school.
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I have had both good and bad experiences with sports at school. A good experience was that I was good at running when I was in elementary school, so I did a short run in track and field. I made it to the semi-finals in the competition, but I was dropped. But it was a good experience. And the bad experience is when I got hit by a ball while exercising and sprained my wrist. It was very painful, but now it\'s all good and I\'m fine.
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I have had both good and bad experiences with sports at school.
>>> CORRECT!
A good experience was that I was good at running when I was in elementary school, so I did a short run in track and field.
>>> The good experience was that I was good at running when I was in elementary school, so I did a short run in track and field.
I made it to the semi-finals in the competition, but I was dropped.
>>> I made it to the semi-finals of the competition, but I was dropped.
But it was a good experience.
>>> CORRECT!
And the bad experience is when I got hit by a ball while exercising and sprained my wrist.
>>> And the bad experience was when I got hit by a ball while exercising and sprained my wrist.
It was very painful, but now it\'s all good and I\'m fine.
>>> It was very painful, but now it\'s all good and fine.
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