good and bad luck.
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Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
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T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
In my opinion, there is such a things of good and bad luck, and I believe them.
>> In my opinion, there is such a thing as good and bad luck, and I believe them.
In fact, I don\'t have any religious belief like christian or buddhism.
>> In fact, I don\'t have any religious beliefs like Christianity or Buddhism.
But I believe luck and fate. so I like tarot card or fortune something.
>> But I believe in luck and fate, so I like tarot cards or fortune telling.
For example, last year they said to me like that.
>> For example, last year, they told me my future.
In march, you have something hard and be careful your back and wrist.
>> In march, you will experience something hard and be careful with your back and wrist.
Important is that don\'t trust every thing.
>> The most important thing is to not trust everything.
just remember and be careful and do my best. at least, during that time.
>> Just remember this and be careful and do my best. at least, during that time.
And as a real, If I have bad issue in a different way than I did.
>> True enough, If I have a bad issue it was in a different way than I expected.
I can overcome the issue because it is just luck or fortune, not my fault.
>> I can overcome the issue because it is because of luck or fortune, it\'s not my fault.
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