good and bad luck.

2020-01-27 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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In my opinion, there is such a things of good and bad luck, and I believe them. In fact, I don\'t have any religious belief like christian or buddhism. But I believe luck and fate. so I like tarot card or fortune something. For example, last year they said to me like that. In march, you have something hard and be careful your back and wrist. Important is that don\'t trust every thing. just remember and be careful and do my best. at least, during that time. And as a real, If I have bad issue in a different way than I did. I can overcome the issue because it is just luck or fortune, not my fault.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

In my opinion, there is such a things of good and bad luck, and I believe them.

>> In my opinion, there is such a thing as good and bad luck, and I believe them.
In fact, I don\'t have any religious belief like christian or buddhism.

>> In fact, I don\'t have any religious beliefs like Christianity or Buddhism.
But I believe luck and fate. so I like tarot card or fortune something.

>> But I believe in luck and fate, so I like tarot cards or fortune telling.
For example, last year they said to me like that.

>> For example, last year, they told me my future.
In march, you have something hard and be careful your back and wrist.

>> In march, you will experience something hard and be careful with your back and wrist.
Important is that don\'t trust every thing.

>> The most important thing is to not trust everything.
just remember and be careful and do my best. at least, during that time.

>> Just remember this and be careful and do my best. at least, during that time.
And as a real, If I have bad issue in a different way than I did.

>> True enough,  If I have a bad issue it was in a different way than I expected.
I can overcome the issue because it is just luck or fortune, not my fault.

>> I can overcome the issue because it is because of luck or fortune, it\'s not my fault.

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