Good bye~

2019-06-28 · 첨삭 강사 Irene

학생이 쓴 원문

Irene~ It is time to say good bye. I am the person who thinks meeting and connecting with someone is very valuable and who believes it is a fate when I meet someone. I mean it is a fate we had met. and also It is a fate we have to say good bye. With your efforts, I have had a great time and have been happy every day. As time goes by, I will not miss you anymore and I will not recall the times when we had. But I am sure that I miss you when the clock alarm at 12 o\'clock for a while. As I told you, you were a great teacher to me. Take care yourself and take a rest ! I hope I can hear your voice again. Bye Irene!

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon Ms. [이름]!  Thank you so much for your kind words. It was my pleasure to have met people like you. ^_^ I wish you all the best in life.

~  T. Irene ~

Irene~
It is time to say good bye.

>>> Correct.  
 I am the person who thinks meeting and connecting with someone is very valuable and who believes it is a fate when I meet someone.

>>>  I am that kind of person who thinks meeting and connecting with someone are very valuable and who believes it is fate to meet someone.  
 I mean it is a fate we had met. and also It is a fate we have to say good bye.
>>>  I mean it is fate that we met and now it is also fate that we have to say goodbye.   
With your efforts, I have had a great time and have been happy every day.

>>>  With your effort, I had a great time and fun every day.   
 As time goes by, I will not miss you anymore and I will not recall the times when we had.

>>>   As time goes by, I will not miss you anymore and I will not recall the times we had.
 But I am sure that I miss you when the clock alarm at 12 o\'clock for a while.

>>>  But I am sure that I will miss you when the clock alarms at 12 o\'clock. 
 As I told you, you were a great teacher to me.
>>>   Correct.  
Take care yourself and take a rest !

>>>  Correct.  
 I hope I can hear your voice again.
Bye Irene!

>>> Correct.   




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