Good bye Tina~ ㅠㅠ
학생이 쓴 원문
Oh I'm sorry to late my homework. I told you during our class today that I had to go travel agency to have a orientation for my trip with my friend. And then I went to my work place. Today was so busy day! Anyway It was a great time that is studying English with you. You always have talked to me a good and worthwhile word. It's helpful to me and I have tried to follow your advice when I see your mention. I miss you and this class. But I will apply to this class again next year.
Oh! 's[이름][이메일]' this is my Facebook ID. If you were having Facebook ID, just add my ID. I will post the photograph that I will take a picture in Europe.
Then see you next year! Thank you very much! Ah! I will write a postscript post my picture in bulletin board. Please see that :)
Here is my last homework.
1. Is this your apple?
2. Are you happy?
3. Is your name Josephine?
4. Are the comics old?
5. Is Charlie in your class?
강사 첨삭
Hello there! ^^
It was very nice of you to find time to do your homework. Congratulations! You got a perfect score! It seems that you are really studying your lessons well. I hope so that I would still be your teacher when you come back in Korea. By the way if you want to communicate with me you can always send me your pictures at our Power English website. I would be willing to communicate with you in that website. Keep up the good work! Take care!
T. Tina =)
Here are my corrections for you:
Oh I\'m sorry to late my homework.
>>I\'m sorry that my homework was late.
I told you during our class today that I had to go travel agency to have a orientation for my trip with my friend.
>>I told you during our class that I had to go to the travel agency to have an orientation for my trip with my friend.
And then I went to my work place.
>>And then I immediately went to my work place.
Today was so busy day!
>>Today was a very busy day!
Anyway It was a great time that is studying English with you.
>>Anyway, it was a great time that I study English with you.
You always have talked to me a good and worthwhile word.
>>You always talk to me using good and worthwhile words.
It\'s helpful to me and I have tried to follow your advice when I see your mention.
>>They are helpful to me and I tried to follow your advice when I see your comments.
I miss you and this class.
>>I miss you and this class.
But I will apply to this class again next year. >>But I will apply to this class again next year.
Oh! \'s[이름][이메일]\' this is my Facebook ID.
>>Oh! \'s[이름][이메일]\', this is my Facebook ID.
If you were having Facebook ID, just add my ID.
>>If you have a Facebook ID, kindly add my ID.
I will post the photograph that I will take a picture in Europe.
>>I will post the pictures that I will capture in Europe. Then see you next year!
>>See you next year!
Thank you very much! Ah!
>>Thank you very much!
I will write a postscript post my picture in bulletin board. Please see that :)>>I will post my picture in the bulletin board. Please see that :)
Here is my last homework. >>Correct!
1. Is this your apple?
>>Correct!2. Are you happy?
>>Correct!3. Is your name Josephine?
>>Correct!4. Are the comics old?
>>Correct!
5. Is Charlie in your class?
>>Correct!
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