good day or someday~

2018-09-19 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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good day or someday~ I made a video clip. I hop you can enjoy this clip. this is not so bad but also not so good. I'll make it better someday. I need more practice to make video and swim. until next week I'm focusing on to be a Youtuber. I will comeback with better a video clip. see you then~ https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iWpdpH8-mgo https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BkIrYIX2rc0 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DKHigGO-WYM

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^


Thank you for sharing your videos. I\'ll check them out!^^


Cheers!
Jean


good day or someday~

>> Good day!


 I made a video clip.

>> correct


 I hop you can enjoy this clip. 

>> I hope you can enjoy this clip.


 this is not so bad but also not so good.

>> This video clip is fairly good.


 I\'ll make it better someday.

>> I\'ll make a better one someday.


 I need more practice to make video and swim.

>> I need more practice in making videos and swimming.


 until next week I\'m focusing on to be a Youtuber.

>> I\'ll be focusing until next week on how to become a good YouTuber. 


 I will comeback with better a video clip.

>> correct


 see you then~

>> See you then!~


 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iWpdpH8-mgo
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BkIrYIX2rc0
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DKHigGO-WYM

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