Good eveing.

2014-12-11 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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Hi. ^^ I had a nice time last weekend with my family. But I have a lot of housework to do. Here is my homework. ^^ This question is very difficult to me. I don't want that people ill. So, new drugs or medical treatments need many test for ill people. However, many animals' life is very important like people. In my opinion, many scientist have to study way to use without animals.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Good evening! ^^ You are right. Animals have lives too. They are living things.  They are creatures. Animals have rights too. They don\'t deserve  to be treated as if they are like trash. They don\'t deserve to be experimented with these new inventions of drugs. They should be loved and protected like humans and they  have families as well. Anyway,[이름], thank you again for making your homework and  have blessed day ahead.  See you ! ~~Teacher Kris I had a nice time last weekend with my family. >> I had a nice time with my family last weekend.But I have a lot of housework to do. >> But now, I have a lot of housework to do.This question is very difficult to me. >> Correct I don\'t want that people ill. >> I don\'t want that people will get sick.So, new drugs or medical treatments need many test for ill people. >> So, new drugs for medical treatments should be tested first before giving it to sick people.However, many animals\' life is very important like people. >> However, animals\' lives is very important as people.In my opinion, many scientist have to study way to use without animals. >> In my opinion, scientists must have to find a way to test new drugs without testing it to animals.

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