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Good Evening ! Teacher Joan ~~ I have wrote today's journal;.... Can you correct it please?^^ Today, I suddenly woke up in the middle of dawn. It was because my stomach started to hurt. Well ,, my stomach started to have a little pain since last week. I couldn't go back to sleep. So, I just closed my eyes and waited until 8 o' clock. On 8:00, I ate breakfast with my family and ate an apple for dessert. Then, I was going to watch a movie called "BICENTENNIAL MAN" just for an hour, but it was so fun, I've watched to the end.;; I studied Math for about an hour and had lunch. Than I finally finished reading a book called 'Whale done'. After finish reading it , I read a different book called " The Chronicles of Narnia". I studied Math again and I studied English. And than I had a lesson with you and right now I'm writing this journal~. Today, I think I've wasted my time to much. Like in the morning, I've watched the whole movie. I should use time more wisely.

Hi [이름]! Good evening my dear^^ Nice composition, you\'ve totally started your weekend studying! That\'s great. of course I\'d help you out with your journal and here it is. Oh and watch your tummy, you\'ve got to go to your doctor if you aren\'t sure what\'s causing the pain. You cannot study well with that pain. I agree, use your time wisely while you\'re young, knowing how to spend it makes you wealthier in wisdom and experience more than any other! Have a great weekend [이름]! Don\'t forget to take a break, munch chocolate^^ kk T\' Joan   Good Evening ! >> CORRECT!Teacher Joan ~~I have wrote today\'s journal;.... Can you correct it please?^^ >>Teacher Joan, I have written my journal today, could you please check it?^^Today, I suddenly woke up in the middle of dawn. >> Today, I suddenly woke up at dawn.It was because my stomach started to hurt. >> It was because my stomach started to ache.Well ,, my stomach started to have a little pain since last week. >> Well,I started to feel a little pain on my stomach since last week.I couldn\'t go back to sleep. >> CORRECT!So, I just closed my eyes and waited until 8 o\' clock.>> CORRECT!On 8:00, I ate breakfast with my family and ate an apple for dessert. >>At 8:00, I ate breakfast with my family and ate an apple for dessert.Then, I was going to watch a movie called \"BICENTENNIAL MAN\" just for an hour, but it was so fun, I\'ve watched to the end.;; >> Then, I watched a movie called \"BICENTENNIAL MAN\" just for an hour, but it was so fun, I\'ve watched it to the end.I studied Math for about an hour and had lunch. >> CORRECT!Than I finally finished reading a book called \'Whale done\'. >>Then I finally finished reading a book called \'Whale done\'.After finish reading it , I read a different book called \" The Chronicles of Narnia\". >> After I finished reading it , I read a different book called \" The Chronicles of Narnia\".I studied Math again and I studied English. >> CORRECT!And than I had a lesson with you and right now I\'m writing this journal~.>>And then I had a lesson with you and right now I\'m writing this journal.Today, I think I\'ve wasted my time to much.>> CORRECT!Like in the morning, I\'ve watched the whole movie. >> CORRECT!I should use time more wisely. >> CORRECT!