Good evening
학생이 쓴 원문
Perhaps I will go for walk around the park everyday with my children. My house is near the many parks and I like go for walk .
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Ms. [이름]!
Walking is a very healthy and relaxing way of exercise. If you are with someone, you do not even feel tired. So, walk safely in the park whenever you can in Canada.
As you can see from your sentences below, I have underlined the suggestions I made. Thus, go over them and make sure to use them well always.
Catch you in class soon!
-T. Donna =)
>> Perhaps I will go for a walk around the park everyday with my children.
My house is near the many parks and I like go for walk .
>> My house is near many parks and I like to go for a walk .
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