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Here is my writing. When I go to the fastfood store, I use "Take out(go to)". This system is very convenient. However, I don't like this system because after I eat some fastfood at home, I have to have some trash. Also, when I dump some trash, I have to pay some money. So, I like to eat the fastfood at the fastfood store. Then, I don't have some trash and pay some money. Here is my homework. I think that wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations because global village is one. Today's homework is very difficult for me. See you later.

Hi [이름]! Good evening! ^^ Thank you for making your homework. Eating fast food is actually not healthy because it contains too much fat and calories as well as MSG\'s which bad to our health. So, I advice you not to eat much fast food. Anyway, thank you for making your homework. Take care and have a happy weekend. ^^ ~~Teacher Kris Here is my writing. >>CorrectWhen I go to the fastfood store, I use \"Take out(go to)\". >> When I go to the fast food store, I use to take out or dine out food.This system is very convenient. >> CorrectHowever, I don\'t like this system because after I eat some fastfood at home, I have to have some trash. >> However, I don\'t like this system because after I eat some fast food at home, I have to have some more trash.Also, when I dump some trash, I have to pay some money. >> Also, when I dump some trash, I have to pay for it.So, I like to eat the fastfood at the fastfood store. >>So, I prefer to eat fast food at the fast food store.Then, I don\'t have some trash and pay some money.>> By that, I will have less trash and I will pay less.Here is my homework. >> CorrectI think that wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations because global village is one. >> I think wealthy nations should share their wealth among poorer nations because we are global partners.Today\'s homework is very difficult for me.>> CorrectSee you later.