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2011-03-10 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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Unfortunately i'm very tired...:( today i was very busy because of my friends and professor. they wanted for me to do something, and i met thier demand with menstruation body. i'm going to English academy every morning at 10:00 AM. so i makeup every morning. but, when i have a night class like today, i feel that my face is going to decay.... but you know what???!!!! i never give up makeuping. someday i went to school without makeup, and my friends said " r u kidding me? go back your home right now. you don't know manner?" . . . . bye,,,,have a nice night!

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Don’t worry much about doing make up because you are already beautiful! J I hope your friends won’t send you back home again because of not doing so. :) Unfortunately i'm very tired...:( >> Correct. Jtoday i was very busy because of my friends and professor. >>Today I was very busy because of my friends and my professor.they wanted for me to do something, and i met thier demand with menstruation body. >>They wanted me to do something and I met their demands though I’m having my mentruation.i'm going to English academy every morning at 10:00 AM. so i makeup every morning. >> I’m going to my English academy every morning at 10:00 A.M so I do make up every morning.but, when i have a night class like today, i feel that my face is going to decay.... >> But when I have a night class like this, I feel that my face is going to decay…but you know what???!!!! i never give up makeuping. >> But you know what? I never give up doing make up.someday i went to school without makeup, and my friends said “r u kidding me? go back your home right now. you don't know manner?" >> One day, I went to school without make up and my friends said, “Are you kidding me?” Go back home right now. Don’t you know manners? bye,,,,have a nice night! >> Correct. J  

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