good evening~
학생이 쓴 원문
it's time too late.
this morning, i found the fact that i have lots of report.
and i started to regret going to blossom festival yesterday.
it was very pretty. and i and my friends enjoyed festival.
but i thought that if i had a boyfriend, i would be more happier.
and i'm crying now without boyfriend and with lots of report.
i will get the phone surely!!!!
see ya!!
강사 첨삭
Hi beauty!
Glad to talk with you today!
I wonder what happened to that festival. Hahahaha… we’ll talk about it tomorrow.
I just want to end exercise letter E on your page 17 that’s why I studied with the book today.
Loving you always,
T. Joanna
it's time too late.
>>It’s already time. I might be late already!
this morning, i found the fact that i have lots of report.
>>This morning, it came to my realization that I have lots of reports to finish.
and i started to regret going to blossom festival yesterday.
>>Now I started regretting in going to the festival yesterday.
it was very pretty. and i and my friends enjoyed festival.
>>It was very good because I and my friends really enjoyed the feast.
but i thought that if i had a boyfriend, i would be more happier.
>>Thinking of having a boyfriend would be merrier.
and i'm crying now without boyfriend and with lots of report.
>>And I’m crying now for not having a boyfriend and with lots of report.
i will get the phone surely!!!!
>>I will get the phone for sure!
see ya!!
>>See yah!
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