good evening~

2011-04-11 · 첨삭 강사 Joanna

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it's time too late. this morning, i found the fact that i have lots of report. and i started to regret going to blossom festival yesterday. it was very pretty. and i and my friends enjoyed festival. but i thought that if i had a boyfriend, i would be more happier. and i'm crying now without boyfriend and with lots of report. i will get the phone surely!!!! see ya!!

강사 첨삭

Hi beauty! Glad to talk with you today! I wonder what happened to that festival. Hahahaha… we’ll talk about it tomorrow. I just want to end exercise letter E on your page 17 that’s why I studied with the book today. Loving you always, T. Joanna   it's time too late. >>It’s already time. I might be late already! this morning, i found the fact that i have lots of report. >>This morning, it came to my realization that I have lots of reports to finish. and i started to regret going to blossom festival yesterday. >>Now I started regretting in going to the festival yesterday. it was very pretty. and i and my friends enjoyed festival. >>It was very good because I and my friends really enjoyed the feast. but i thought that if i had a boyfriend, i would be more happier. >>Thinking of having a boyfriend would be merrier. and i'm crying now without boyfriend and with lots of report. >>And I’m crying now for not having a boyfriend and with lots of report. i will get the phone surely!!!! >>I will get the phone for sure! see ya!! >>See yah!

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