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2011-04-18 · 첨삭 강사 Ella

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i am planing to visit Jeonju that is famous travel place in korea but i haven't ever visited there so i will go there soon i am searching much information about the tour course of Jeonju i hope Jenoju travel will be interesting

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Good morning [이름]! Thank you so much for your composition. I hope that you will enjoy your trip to Jeonju Island. Take care and have a nice Monday!

i am planing to visit Jeonju that is famous travel place in korea

>> I am planning to visit Jeonju which is a famous travel place in Korea.
but i haven't ever visited there

>> Correct.

>> But I have never visited the place.
so i will go there soon
 
>> Correct.

>> So I will visit the place soon.
i am searching much information about the tour course of Jeonju
>> I am searching for informations about the tour course of Jeonju.
i hope Jenoju travel will be interesting

>> I hope that my travel to Jeonju will be interesting.

 

 

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