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2011-05-02 · 첨삭 강사 Kristel

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this writing is TOEIC Speaking please correct my wrong this looks garbage dump at the back of a buuilding i can see trash and bottle that is dispersed so it is somewhat messy one woman is standing in the middle of the picture she is wearing her white hat, bag and red one-piece i don't know why she is standing there i think she seems to want to throw trash i can often see this situation in the city

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Hello [이름]! Good evening! I hope I helped you with this one. I imagined myself looking at the picture of what you were describing here. =) -       Teacher Kristel-   please correct my wrong >> Please correct my mistakes.this looks garbage dump at the back of a buuilding >> This picture looks like a garbage dump at the back of a building.i can see trash and bottle that is dispersed so it is somewhat messy. >> Some of the trash like bottles are dispersed so it is somewhat messy.one woman is standing in the middle of the picture >> A woman is standing in the middle of the picture.she is wearing her white hat, bag and red one-piece >> She is wearing a red dress and a whit hat. She's carrying a bag.i don't know why she is standing there >> I don't know why she's standing there.i think she seems to want to throw trash >> I think, she wants to throw trash.i can often see this situation in the city. >> I often see this kind of situation in the city.

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