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2011-05-02 · 첨삭 강사 Dona

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this looks like a toy of a house it looks neat and beautiful generally, the house is white color but roof of the house is grey and the front of the house is also yellow there are many flwers around little house and a little girl is sitting on the right side by reading a book this picture looks peaceful and leisurely

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Thanks for dropping by [이름]. I hope you enjoy your weekend. And here are my sentence corrections for you...   this looks like a toy of a house  >>This looks like a toy house.it looks neat and beautiful  >>CORRECT but it should be written like this. >>It looks neat and beautiful.generally, the house is white color but roof of the house is grey and the front of the house is also yellow  >>Generally, the house has a white color except for the roof of the house which is grey and the front of the house which is yellow.there are many flwers around little house and a little girl is sitting on the right side by reading a book >>There are many flowers around the little house and a little girl is sitting on the right side by reading a book.this picture looks peaceful and leisurely >>CORRECT but should be written like this. >>This picture looks peaceful and leisurely.

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