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2011-05-04 · 첨삭 강사 Christine

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Q: What have you done to improve your English skill? In order to improve my English skill I study in English every day. Whenever I do something I usually try to study in English such as listen to english radio and phone english. I prefer to usually use in English if I have spare time. For example I listen to english radio during transportation and I have a best friend who is Filipina in korea so I practice speak English trough her. Q: What do you feel is essential to having a successful life? The most essential to having a successful life is health. Everyone wants to live in comfort and eager to their's nice job and so do I. But If we are unhealthy and It's no use. So To find something good job and order to enjoy life I focus on my health.

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  Thanks [이름]~! Thanks for writing your composition!! ~ T. Christine >_< Q: What have you done to improve your English skill? >> Correct!In order to improve my English skill I study in English every day. >> In order to improve my English skill, I study English every day.Whenever I do something I usually try to study in English such as listen to english radio and phone english. >> Whenever I do something I usually try to study in English such as listen to English radio stations and study through a phone english school.I prefer to usually use in English if I have spare time. >> I prefer to use my spare time in improving my English skills.For example I listen to english radio during transportation and I have a best friend who is Filipina in korea so I practice speak English trough her. >> For example I listen to English radio stations during transportation and I have a best friend who is a Filipina in Korea, so I can practice speaking in English with her.Q: What do you feel is essential to having a successful life? >> Correct!The most essential to having a successful life is health. >> The most essential thing for me to be successful is to be healthy. Everyone wants to live in comfort and eager to their's nice job and so do I.>> Everyone wants to live in comfort and we all aspire to have nice jobs, so do I. But If we are unhealthy and It's no use.>> But if we are unhealthy then it is of no use. So To find something good job and order to enjoy life I focus on my health. >>  So to find enjoyment in my job and in my life, I focus on my health.  

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