good evening
학생이 쓴 원문
hello tutor
it is a mild day today
but i didn't go on a picnic with my friends
because i had to study for exam
recently i didn't study Toeic speaking
i want to exam Toeic speaking in July
so i think i prepare it sincerely and also study grammar
Have a good weekend ^0^
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Thank you for dropping in this composition even if you were tired. I appreciate it. I'm sorry to hear that you weren't able to hang-out with your friends today. But I know that you can achieve your goals as long as you work hard for them. After all, no pain no gain, right? You too, enjoy your weekend! J Take care!
-T.Dominic-
hello tutor >>Hello tutor, it is a mild day today >>It was a mild day today.
>>[OR] It was a good day today. but i didn't go on a picnic with my friends >>But I didn't go on a picnic with my friends because I had to study for the exam. because i had to study for exam recently i didn't study Toeic speaking >>I haven't studied TOEIC Speaking lately. i want to exam Toeic speaking in July >>I want to take the exam on TOEIC speaking on July.so i think i prepare it sincerely and also study grammar >>So I think I will prepare for it sincerely and will also study grammar more.Have a good weekend ^0^
>>CORRECTBottom of Form
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.