Good evening!

2016-02-17 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good evening, Teacher! It is snowing now! When I was younger, I used to like seeing snow falling. However, after getting order, as soon as I see snow falling, I start thinking that it will cause some bothersome situations such as snowy roads and traffic jams. I admit that I already lost a feeling of romance. What should I do to make me back to normal? Hehehe! Now, I am a little sentimental because of the weather and really want to go back into the past when I was in my school days. If I went back to the past, I would be able to do a snowball fight with my friends. Well, time goes so fast! ^^;; Tomorrow, I am planning to visit one of my clients in the morning so I'd like to submit my composition in advance. See you tomorrow! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Hello and happy Wednesday, [이름]!^^Sorry I sent this composition a little bit late. I want to see snow.^^ But you know that I can\'t not because we don\'t have it here but because I can\'t tolerate the cold feeling!^^ kkk Let\'s talk more about it later!^^ ~~Teacher Erine~~ Good evening, Teacher! >> CorrectIt is snowing now! >> CorrectWhen I was younger, I used to like seeing snow falling. >> CorrectHowever, after getting order, as soon as I see snow falling, I start thinking that it will cause some bothersome situations such as snowy roads and traffic jams. >> However, as I get older, I start thinking that it will cause some bothersome situations such as snowy roads and traffic jams.I admit that I already lost a feeling of romance. >> I admit that I already lost the romantic feeling.What should I do to make me back to normal? Hehehe! >> What should I do to make me go back to normal? Hehehe! Now, I am a little sentimental because of the weather and really want to go back into the past when I was in my school days. >> CorrectIf I went back to the past, I would be able to do a snowball fight with my friends. >> CorrectWell, time goes so fast! ^^;; >> CorrectTomorrow, I am planning to visit one of my clients in the morning so I\'d like to submit my composition in advance. >> CorrectSee you tomorrow! ^^** >> Correct

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·