Good evening!
학생이 쓴 원문
Good evening, Teacher!
It is snowing now!
When I was younger, I used to like seeing snow falling.
However, after getting order, as soon as I see snow falling, I start thinking that it will cause some bothersome situations such as snowy roads and traffic jams.
I admit that I already lost a feeling of romance.
What should I do to make me back to normal? Hehehe!
Now, I am a little sentimental because of the weather and really want to go back into the past when I was in my school days.
If I went back to the past, I would be able to do a snowball fight with my friends.
Well, time goes so fast! ^^;;
Tomorrow, I am planning to visit one of my clients in the morning so I'd like to submit my composition in advance.
See you tomorrow! ^^**
강사 첨삭
Hello and happy Wednesday, [이름]!^^Sorry I sent this composition a little bit late.
I want to see snow.^^ But you know that I can\'t not because
we don\'t have it here but because I can\'t tolerate the cold feeling!^^
kkk
Let\'s talk more about it later!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good evening, Teacher!
>> CorrectIt is snowing now!
>> CorrectWhen I was younger, I used to like seeing snow falling.
>> CorrectHowever, after getting order, as soon as I see snow falling, I start thinking that it will cause some bothersome situations such as snowy roads and traffic jams.
>> However, as I get older, I start thinking that it will cause some bothersome situations such as snowy roads and traffic jams.I admit that I already lost a feeling of romance.
>> I admit that I already lost the romantic feeling.What should I do to make me back to normal? Hehehe!
>> What should I do to make me go back to normal? Hehehe! Now, I am a little sentimental because of the weather and really want to go back into the past when I was in my school days.
>> CorrectIf I went back to the past, I would be able to do a snowball fight with my friends.
>> CorrectWell, time goes so fast! ^^;;
>> CorrectTomorrow, I am planning to visit one of my clients in the morning so I\'d like to submit my composition in advance.
>> CorrectSee you tomorrow! ^^**
>> Correct
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