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Hello~~ I have just finished today's class. Today i read Question 8~~! But i didn't complete 45 seconds . Oh my god! i think i could adjust 45 seconds exactly. I have to practice more in Question 9 by completing 45s . By the way Have a good weekend . See you Monday~~!

Hello Ms. [이름], Thank you for sending this composition! Haha! You can still work on the time, I think that tonight you have already mastered your pacing. The tip to have a longer answer is on the adjectives. Always describe what you see, like on Q8, you can describe the water as calm and serene, the clouds are clear and the weather is perfect something like that. Thank you for the very good class today Ms. [이름]! Have a wonderful weekend! -T. Dominic hello~~>>Hello, i have just finished today's class >>CORRECT >>I have just finished today's class.today i read Question 8~~!>>Today I read Question 8!but i didn't complete 45 seconds >>But I didn't complete the 45 second requirement. oh my god! i think i could adjust 45 seconds exactly>>Oh my God! I think I could still adjust to exactly 45 seconds. i have to practice more in Question 9 by completing 45s>>I have to practice more for Question 9 so I can complete 45 seconds. by the way have a good weekend>>By the way, have a good weekend. see you monday~~! >>See you on Monday!