good evening
학생이 쓴 원문
Good evening~~
I had a headache yesterday.
So i took medicime and deely slept .
But i am just fine today!
By the way it is a little raining in korea .
When it's raining , many people like to be at home.
Because people don't go around easiiy .
강사 첨삭
Hey [이름]!
Thanks for the class we had tonight! I see that you have really been practicing lately! Good job! It's good to know that you feel a lot better compared yesterday. I hope you can get enough sleep tonight. Btw, what do you usually do when it rains and you are stuck at home.
- T.Dominic -
Good evening~~>>Good evening. I had a headache yesterday.>>CORRECTSo i took medicime and deely slept .>>So I took a medicine and had a deep sleep. But i am just fine today!>>But I am feeling fine today! By the way it is a little raining in korea .>>By the way it is drizzling here in Korea. When it's raining , many people like to be at home.>>When it rains people like to stay at home because they can't go around easily. Because people don't go around easiiy .
>> That's becuase people don't go around easily.
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