Good evening
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi John,
How is it going? You did great in your sentences and I just saw a few errors so I already checked them for you. Here they are . Enjoy!
~~ Teacher Travis
I work for KFC Korea Financial Consulting. KFC is a data and system
solution provider regarding 2nd hand-car. In detail, we provide the fair
market value of each car model to Credit financial companies,
anti-fraud service through the car’s registration and sales solution for
inventory financing and inspection service.
In Korea, all commercial used car inventory has to register their
status, sales price and location etc. KFC can access these information
and compute average price, check availability.
I joined KFC about 3 months ago to develop to find growth strategy to
synergy with existing company business. I started from used car
exporting or other overseas business and then will review local market.
>> I worked for Korea Financial Consulting or KFC in short. KFC is a data and system solution provider relating to 2nd hand-cars. In detail, we provide the fair market value of each car model to Credit financial companies, anti-fraud service through the car’s registration and sales solution for inventory financing and inspection service.
In Korea, all commercial used car inventory has to register their status, sales price and location etc. KFC can access these information and compute the average price and check it\'s availability.
I joined KFC about 3 months ago to develop and seek growth strategy to synergy with existing company business. I started from used cars exporting or other overseas business and then will review local market.
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