good evening!

2011-11-07 · 첨삭 강사 Joan

학생이 쓴 원문

I nerver tell you again 'good night !' That's my terrible funny mistake. Today I am left at library for study. last friday you told me some advice about my friend problem. Thanks for your advice! I can make sure my mind and didn't miss any more. That mean, I didn't told any terrible complain to my friedn and I could have sure pure and peaceful mind. These days, I expect the German life. I believe I can adapt to there and make a good friends. Korea's fall is very beautiful and make people sentimental. May next or next next day I up-load my poto with fall-red-tree in Seoul N mountain to facebook. If you have a time and interest, entry my facebook page. here -> http://www.facebook.com/gaeun.kim2/posts/285053961527062?cmntid=285113058187819#!/profile.php?id=100001070645094 I wait your contact !

강사 첨삭

Hi Minjeong! ^^ That was really funny, saying hello then good night all of a sudden haha. Well that\'s fine I understand that sometimes it slips one\'s mind. You might just be so preoccupied of something that day. And for the advice, you\'re always welcome. we\'ve got to really do things to keep good friends around^^. I would try visiting your account when I am free. Thanks for allowing me to do so! I\'m expecting to see your photos this fall. Til then! Study hard! T\' Joan I nerver tell you again \'good night !\' >>I will never tell you \'good night !\' again.That\'s my terrible funny mistake. >>That was my terrible and funny mistake.Today I am left at library for study. >>Today I am left at the library to study.last friday you told me some advice about my friend problem. >>Last Friday, you told me some advice about my friend\'s problem.Thanks for your advice! I can make sure my mind and didn\'t miss any more. >>Thanks for your advice! I can make sure of my mind and that I didn\'t miss anything more. That mean, I didn\'t told any terrible complain to my friedn and I could have sure pure and peaceful mind.>>That means, I didn\'t tell any terrible complain to my friend and I could have sure, pure and peaceful mind.These days, I expect the German life. >>These days, I\'m expecting about German life. I believe I can adapt to there and make a good friends. >> I believe I can adapt easily in there and make good friends.Korea\'s fall is very beautiful and make people sentimental. >>Korea\'s fall is very beautiful, it makes people sentimental.May next or next next day I up-load my poto with fall-red-tree in Seoul N mountain to facebook. >>Maybe next time or in two days I\'ll upload my photo this fall in a red-tree in Seoul mountain at facebook.If you have a time and interest, entry my facebook page. >>If you have time and in case you\'re interested, visit my facebook page.here ->http://www.facebook.com/gaeun.kim2/posts/285053961527062?cmntid=285113058187819#!/profile.php?id=100001070645094 >>Here:http://www.facebook.com/gaeun.kim2/posts/285053961527062?cmntid=285113058187819#!/profile.php?id=100001070645094I wait your contact ! >>I\'ll wait for you to contact me

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