good evening

2011-11-30 · 첨삭 강사 Erica

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hello iam [이름] i arrived at home a few minutes ago when i started English class so i could't prepared for today's study and tommorrow i will have a dinner with superior and co-workers and i think they will drink so i guess that maybe we will have to do free talk if i can't arrive my home on time anyway thank you for ur class see you next time ^0^

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]. ^^ Thank you also for sending this composition. You have to use capital letters at the beginning of the sentences. ^^ Ok then, we will do that tomorrow. ^^ Have a good rest! ^^   hello iam [이름]>>Hello, I am [이름].i arrived at home a few minutes ago when i started English class>>I arrived home a few minutes before our English class.so i could\'t prepared for today\'s study >>So I was not prepared for today's class.and tommorrow i will have a dinner with superior and co-workers >>Tomorrow I will be having dinner with my superior and co-workers.and i think they will drink >>And I think they will drink. so i guess that maybe we will have to do free talk if i can\'t arrive my home on time>>So, I guess we will just have to do free talking tomorrow if I do not arrive home on time.anyway thank you for ur class>>Anyway, thank you for our class.see you next time ^0^ >>See you next time. ^0^

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