Good evening :D

2011-03-03 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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Thank you again for calling. Please correct in the following sentences. My additional anwer for qustion no.1,2 The club which I joined is gathering for people who love literature and Music. We had to read books and listen to music. But we used to drink alcohol. I think that club was not productive to me. But, I've made a lot of friends through joining that club. I remember my teachers except to my primary school teachers. I have another teacher who I like. She is a teacher who thougt me before at Power English. She is very kind and funny. (May be, you too) I think you are a very good teacher for anything l know. Because you have leadership and your pronunciation is very clear and you seem to have passion for teaching as l told you earlier. Good night :D

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Hi [이름]! Thank you for commending my teaching skills. I appreciate that. I also think that you are a very good student since you are persistent in trying to construct good sentences. Continue doing that and you’ll be a very fluent English speaker someday! I’ll talk to you again tomorrow! Goodnight! -       Kristel c”,) Here are my corrections: Thank you again for calling. >> correctPlease correct in the following sentences. My additional anwer for qustion no.1,2>> Please correct the following sentences, there are my additional answer for questions no. 1 and 2:The club which I joined is gathering for people who love literature and Music. >> The club which I joined to was for people who love literature and music.We had to read books and listen to music. But we used to drink alcohol. >> We had to read books and listen to music but we used to drink alcohol too.I think that club was not productive to me. >> correct >> OR: I think that club was not productive.But, I've made a lot of friends through joining that club.>> But, I made a lot of friends by joining that club.I remember my teachers except to my primary school teachers. >> I remembered all of my teachers except my primary school teachers.I have another teacher who I like. >> I have another teacher whom I like.She is a teacher who thougt me before at Power English. >> She is the teacher who taught me before at power English.She is very kind and funny. (May be, you too) >> She is very kind and funny. (Maybe you are too!)I think you are a very good teacher for anything l know. >> OR: I think you are a very good teacher, for all l know.Because you have leadership and your pronunciation is very clearand you seem to have passion for teaching as l told you earlier.>> You have leadership and your pronunciation is very clear and you seem to have passion for teaching as I have told you earlier.

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