Good evening Jade!
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Jade
I'm so happy whenever I'm here, because I feel like we are together in this time.
Anyway, these days I have been often surprised at my age.
when I was a kid, I thought, If I were 20's, I would become a great adult.
But..
Suddenly, I noticed I'm 20's now.
Middle of 20's...;;
It seems to burden me.
So, I wonder what about you in your case.
And If you don't mind, let me know your age.
I have been curious quite a while.
Now I gotta go
See you tomorrow~^-^
Good Night!
강사 첨삭
[이름],
Funny how you said, you’re happy of the feeling like we are together. I thought sometimes, I am stressing my students with all the English skills I am trying to sharpen on them. It makes me feel good that my students are not getting tired of all the studies that we are doing^^.
Call you soon and I will tell you how young I am. Hahahahaha!!! You’ll be surprised!
Hi JadeI'm so happy whenever I'm here, because I feel like we are together in this time.>>I’m so happy whenever I ma here because it feels like we are together even at this time. Anyway, these days I have been often surprised at my age.>>Anyway, these days, I am often surprised of how old I am getting. when I was a kid, I thought, If I were 20's, I would become a great adult.>>When I was a kid, I have thought of my self a full grown adult at the age of 20. But..Suddenly, I noticed I'm 20's now.>>And….suddenly, I realized I ma already 20. Middle of 20's...;;>>Mid 20’s
>>Running 21. It seems to burden me.>>It seems a burden to me. So, I wonder what about you in your case.>>So, I wonder; what about inn your case? And If you don't mind, let me know your age.>>correct
>>If you don’t mind, could I know your age?I have been curious quite a while.>>I have been curious for quite a while. Now I gotta go>>I gotta go now. See you tomorrow~^-^>>correct Good Night!
>> ^^..
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