Good evening teacher!
학생이 쓴 원문
Good evening, Teacher!
Now it’s 12:00 clock in Korea
I really wants to go to sleep but I can’t I have to study
Today was second time to talk with you
I think you are active person too
and also you shared a lot of your ideas too
When I ask my brother about you
He said you are very nice also friendly teacher
I think that is correct
I like you so much:)
Anyway the weather is getting cold here
I think fall is coming
I have to wear long sleeve t-shirts
As you know we had a earthquake again
I am really scare
I think big earthquake will be come
I hope nothing happenes to us
When I turn on the TV I can see the headline
It says earthquake 4.5 are happening on Busan
I hope there are no people who heart or die
I will stop here and go to bed now~
See you tomorrow
강사 첨삭
Hi, there pretty [이름]!
Thank you for sharing the news about the earthquake.
You cannot really tell when it\'s coming or not.
Just be prepared and take care of yourself.
See you!
Be careful with punctuations when writing. ^^
_Teacher Dianne
Good evening, Teacher!
>> CorrectNow it’s 12:00 clock in Korea
>> Now it’s 12:00 in Korea.
>> Or: Now it’s 12 midnight in Korea.
I really wants to go to sleep but I can’t I have to study
>> I really want to go to sleep but I can’t because I have to study.Today was second time to talk with you
>> Today was my second time to talk with you.I think you are active person too
>> I think you are an active person too.and also you shared a lot of your ideas too
>> You also shared a lot of your ideas.When I ask my brother about you He said you are very nice also friendly teacher
>> When I asked my brother about you, he said that you are very nice and a friendly teacher as well.I think that is correct
>> I think that is correct. (Thank you ^___^)I like you so much. :)
>> Correct (I like you too ^.^)Anyway the weather is getting cold here
>> Anyway the weather is getting cold here.I think fall is coming
>> I think fall is coming.I have to wear long sleeve t-shirts
>> I have to wear long sleeve t-shirts.As you know we had a earthquake again I am really scare
>> As you know, we had an earthquake again and I am really scared.I think big earthquake will be come >> I think a strong earthquake will come.
I hope nothing happenes to us
>> I hope nothing happens to us.When I turn on the TV I can see the headline It says earthquake 4.5 are happening on Busan
>> When I turned on the TV I saw the headline and it says an earthquake of 4.5 magnitude happened in Busan.I hope there are no people who heart or die
>> I hope no one there died or got hurt.I will stop here and go to bed now~
>> I will stop here and go to bed now.See you tomorrow
>> See you tomorrow!
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