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Good evening , teacher!. Today, we talked about friendship. I think friend is very important for everyone. Actully I have a lot of friends but I think I can count my true friends ( there are not a lot of true friends ) Then, what is the true friends and where can I find true friend? Do you want to hear about real friendship? First, True friend always don’t lie True friend tell the true I think I don’t lie so I can be a true friends to other. Second, misfortune shows those who are not really friend When I get danger of when I get sad True friend help and share our sadness I think this is the most important thing When I ask to people that do you have any true friends? all of them has same answer “no” Maybe first, I have to be a true friend Then some day I will have my true friend PS. teacher do you have any true friend? and also what is real friendship to you?

Hi, there my dear [이름]!   Thank you for this composition and thank you for sharing. Just be careful with punctuations. About your questions... Well, I guess I have two real friends. I trust them very much and they know a lot about me. They haven\'t betrayed me ever since we met. They\'re my long time friends. ^^ Real friendship for me is when you and your friends understand each other and know about your personality. There should be trust, relationship, and accountability which means genuine friendship suppors during times of struggle.   _Teacher Dianne   Good evening , teacher!. >> Good evening, teacher!Today, we talked about friendship. >> CorrectI think friend is very important for everyone. >> I think a friend is very important for everyone.Actully I have a lot of friends but I think I can count my true friends ( there are not a lot of true friends )>> Actually, I have a lot of friends, but I think I can count my true friends because I don\'t have a lot of true friends. Then, what is the true friends and where can I find true friend? >> What is a true friend and where can I find a true friend?Do you want to hear about real friendship? >> Correct >> Or: Do you want to know about real friendship?First, True friend always don’t lie. >> First, a true friend doesn\'t lie.True friend tell the true >> A true friend tells the truth.I think I don’t lie so I can be a true friends to other. >> I think I don’t lie so I can be a true friend to others. >> Or: I think I\'m not a liar so I can be a true friend to other people.Second, misfortune shows those who are not really friend >> Second, misfortune shows those who are not really true friends. >> Or: Second, unexpected events will show who the real friends are. When I get danger of when I get sad True friend help and share our sadness >> When I\'m in danger or when I\'m sad, a true friend helps and shares her sadness. I think this is the most important thing >> I think this is the most important thing. When I ask to people that do you have any true friends?all of them has same answer “no” >> When I asked people if they have any true friends, all of them answered \"no\".Maybe first, I have to be a true friend >> Maybe first, I have to be a true friend.Then some day I will have my true friend >> Then some day I will have my true friend.PS. teacher do you have any true friend? >> PS. Teacher, do you have any true friend?and also what is real friendship to you? >> What is real friendship to you?