Good evening teacher~!

2017-03-17 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Good evening teacher~! I was so glad that we had a class earlier than before It maked me happy I hope i can go to the downtown tomrrow with my mom My mom told me that she didn't decide about go shopping in downtown Anyway we talked about camping today 96 students will go to the camping I heard that we will make a ceramics and we will have discussion about shcool rules For example do not put on makeup, don't bring cosmetic to school Don't wear Civilian clothes I want to change our school rules I can't remember more I will ask to my teacher and tell you about the camp I am sorry that today i can't focus on the class Because i had a headache i think i have to go to the hospital this weekend It was great to talk with you teacher:) love you so much

강사 첨삭

Oh my baby! I am so sorry you were suffering from headache...

I hope you will feel better soon.

Anyway you did really good! I am always proud of you I hope you know that.

I will just call you then again..

Take care baby! Love you much! <3 :*

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

Good evening teacher~!

>>correct

I was so glad that we had a class earlier than before

>>correct

It maked me happy 

>>It made me happy.

I hope i can go to the downtown tomrrow with my mom 

>>correct (Observe the proper spelling of the word TOMORROW)

My mom told me that she didn\'t decide about go shopping in downtown

>>My mom told me she hasn\'t decided yet whether she will go shopping or not.

Anyway we talked about camping today

>>correct

96 students will go to the camping

>>correct

I heard that we will make a ceramics 

>>I heard we will make some ceramics.

and we will have discussion about shcool rules

>>And we will discuss about school rules.

For example do not put on makeup, don\'t bring cosmetic to school

>>correct

Don\'t wear Civilian clothes 

>>correct

I want to change our school rules

>>correct

I can\'t remember more

>>correct

I will ask to my teacher and tell you about the camp

>>correct

I am sorry that today i can\'t focus on the class

>>correct

Because i had a headache i think i have to go to the hospital this weekend

>>correct

It was great to talk with you teacher:) love you so much

>>correct

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