Good evening teacher~!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Oh my baby! I am so sorry you were suffering from headache...
I hope you will feel better soon.
Anyway you did really good! I am always proud of you I hope you know that.
I will just call you then again..
Take care baby! Love you much! <3 :*
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Good evening teacher~!
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I was so glad that we had a class earlier than before
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It maked me happy
>>It made me happy.
I hope i can go to the downtown tomrrow with my mom
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My mom told me that she didn\'t decide about go shopping in downtown
>>My mom told me she hasn\'t decided yet whether she will go shopping or not.
Anyway we talked about camping today
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96 students will go to the camping
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I heard that we will make a ceramics
>>I heard we will make some ceramics.
and we will have discussion about shcool rules
>>And we will discuss about school rules.
For example do not put on makeup, don\'t bring cosmetic to school
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Don\'t wear Civilian clothes
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I want to change our school rules
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I can\'t remember more
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I will ask to my teacher and tell you about the camp
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I am sorry that today i can\'t focus on the class
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Because i had a headache i think i have to go to the hospital this weekend
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It was great to talk with you teacher:) love you so much
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