Good evening teacher~!

2017-03-23 · 첨삭 강사 camille

학생이 쓴 원문

Good evening teacher~! Today was boring day like other days kkk... I went to the school, i studied math and english I hope i can do special things On the friday i am going to go camping with my school friends I am not going to go to school on that day Also 7teachers are comming too I am kind of exciting The rest of the students study at school They really jealous of me I am so happy Do you have any plans for the weekend? I am going to meet my elementary school friends I hope they recognize me because i changed a lot :) I am really excting see you on the class:)

강사 첨삭

Hi baby! Thank you so much for always keeping track of your homework. Keep up the good work baby. I will be missing you :(. I love love you baby! Can\'t wait to hear your voice again. Have a good night!

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

Good evening teacher~!

>>correct
 Today was boring day like other days kkk...

>>Today was a boring day just like the other days, kkk.
 I went to the school, i studied math and english

>>correct
 I hope i can do special things

>>correct

OR:I hope I can do something special.
 On the friday i am going to go camping with my school friends

>>On Friday I am going to go camping with my school friends.
 I am not going to go to school on that day

>>correct
 Also 7teachers are comming too

>>7 teachers are also coming.
 I am kind of exciting

>>I am kind of excited!
 The rest of the students study at school

>>correct
 They really jealous of me

>>They are really jealous of me.
 I am so happy

>>correct
 Do you have any plans for the weekend?

>>correct
 I am going to meet my elementary school friends

>>correct
 I hope they recognize me because i changed a lot :)

>>correct
 I am really excting see you on the class:)

>>I am really excited to see you in class. ^^

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