Good fences make good neighbors?

2017-08-31 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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'Good fences make good neighbors' is the sentence in the the poem written by Robert Frost. The title of the poem is the 'Mending Wall'. The poet is consist of the contents which is communicating the neighbor. He is all pine and I am apple orchard. My apple trees will never get across. And eat the cones under his pines, I tell him. He only says, "Good fences make good neighbors.' The poet says that he does not need a fence. But the neighbor insists that he needs the fence. The meaning of a sentence seems to be necessary the wall, but ironically, the poet insists that he does not need a fence. Without seeing the full text of poetry, some people say that there respect personal private areas. The poet tries to tell the difference between tradition and awareness of reality. Finally, the point is there is a fence or not. If you have a fence, do you feel your personal boundaries? If you have not a fence, Do you feel more familiar with neighbors? I think it is not the wall but the mind.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!
You talked about Robert Frost\'s poem \'Mending Wall\' in your composition today. I also like some of Robert Frost\'s poems like \"The Road Not Taken\" and \"Stopping by Woods on A Snowy Evening\". You made a good point today. You said on your concluding sentence that it\'s not the wall that is the problem between neighbors but actually the mind or the attitude of the people. Thank you  for sharing your excellent ideas with me. See you in class!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
\'Good fences make good neighbors\' is the sentence in the the poem written by Robert Frost.
>> correct!
The title of the poem is the \'Mending Wall\'.
>> correct!
The poet is consist of the contents which is communicating the neighbor.
>>
The poem speak about communicating with the neighbors.
He is all pine and I am apple orchard.

>>
\"He is all pine and I am apple orchard.\"
My apple trees will never get across. And eat the cones under his pines, I tell him.
>> correct!
He only says, \"Good fences make good neighbors.\"
>> correct!
The poet says that he does not need a fence.
>> correct!
But the neighbor insists that he needs the fence.
>> correct!
The meaning of a sentence seems to be necessary the wall, but ironically, the poet insists that he does not need a fence.
>>
The  sentence seems to mean the wall is necessary, but ironically, the poet insists that he does not need a fence.
Without seeing the full text of poetry, some people say that there respect personal private areas.
>>
Without seeing the full text of the poem, some people might say that they respect each others personal or private areas.
The poet tries to tell the difference between tradition and awareness of reality.
>>
But actually the poet tries to tell the difference between tradition and awareness of reality.
Finally, the point is there is a fence or not.
>> Finally, the point is, should there be a fence or not.
If you have a fence, do you feel your personal boundaries?
>> correct!
If you have not a fence, Do you feel more familiar with neighbors?
>> If you do not have a fence, would you be familiar with the neighbors?
I think it is not the wall but the mind.
>> I think it\'s not the wall that is the problem but the mind.

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