Good gets good, Mean gets mean
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There was a poor girl named Good and her wealthy sister named Mean. She was mean enough to shoo their mother out of their home and get all the money she forced their mother to give. Mean used up all the money she had and was planning to sneak her sister Good\'s 7 lucky coins too. Good noticed that one of her lucky coins that her mom gave to her dissapeared, she found it in Mean\'s pocket and moved to the neighboring hut. When Mean saw Good had moved she laughed an evil laugh and went into Good\'s room to take all of Good\'s things. But it was gone. Mean stood there gawking. She then remembered her sister was kind. She so then grabbed a frog and pretended to eat it. Good was terrified. But Good knew Mean too. She pretended to be a grandmother and saved the frog. The the frog said, \"I will grant you `two wishes.\" And with tears, Good replied, \"Please banish my sister to the opposite of the world. And please give me back my mom,\" and she got what she wanted. Good gets good, Mean gets mean. ^^
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Good day, Heather! That\'s right, that when you do good, good things will happen. There is a saying, \"Don\'t to others what you don\'t want them to do to you.\" Remember to stay kind. I will see you in class. ~ T. Lyn
There was a poor girl named Good and her wealthy sister named Mean.
>>Correct.
She was mean enough to shoo their mother out of their home and get all the money she forced their mother to give.
>>Mean was so mean to kick her mother out of their house and take all the money which she forced her mom to give her.
Mean used up all the money she had and was planning to sneak her sister Good\'s 7 lucky coins too.
>>Mean planned to spend all her money and sneak Good\'s 7 lucky coins.
Good noticed that one of her lucky coins that her mom gave to her dissapeared, she found it in Mean\'s pocket and moved to the neighboring hut.
>>Good noticed that one of her lucky cons her mother gave was missing but later on, she found it in Mean\'s pocket and she decided to move into the neighboring hut.
When Mean saw Good had moved she laughed an evil laugh and went into Good\'s room to take all of Good\'s things.
>>When Mean say that Good moved to the hut, she gave and evil laugh and went into Good\'s room to take all Good\'s things.
But it was gone.
>>But, they were gone.
Mean stood there gawking.
>>Mean stood blankly.
She then remembered her sister was kind.
>>Then, she remembered how kind her sister is.
She so then grabbed a frog and pretended to eat it.
>>So Mean caught a frog and pretended to eat it.
Good was terrified.
>>Good was terrified when she saw it.
But Good knew Mean too.
>>But Good knew Mean\'s behavior well.
She pretended to be a grandmother and saved the frog.
>>That\'s why she pretended to be a grandmother and saved the frog.
The the frog said, \"I will grant you `two wishes.\"
>>It turned out that the frog could grant wishes, so the frog told Good to grant her two wishes.
And with tears, Good replied, \"Please banish my sister to the opposite of the world.
>>In response, Good shed tears and said, \"Please banish my sister to the other side of the world.\"
And please give me back my mom,\" and she got what she wanted.
>>Also, please give me back my mother, and her wishes came true.
Good gets good, Mean gets mean.
>>Good got what she deserved as well as Mean.
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