good morning.~
학생이 쓴 원문
it's a brand-new day.~ it is very refreshing day. on my way to work i saw the beautiful flowers and the sky was very clear and blue. i like calm moring. from today, i will start another English class on the internet. for expectation of new class, i feel excitement. time flies very fast. i like it. because i expect this september. i will work at this company until september. but without my english skills improvement, i wouldn't do it. so for my aim i will be endeavor in my best.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Well it’s nice to know that you are actually enjoying the weather today. Regarding your English comprehension, you are actually doing good. You just need to polish your skills on some areas. Be patient because it’s for your own good. Can’t wait having classes with you. See you later!!
Lei J
it's a brand-new day.~
>>correct
it is very refreshing day.
>>It is a very refreshing day.
on my way to work i saw the beautiful flowers and the sky was very clear and blue.
>>correct
i like calm moring.
>>I like calm mornings
from today, i will start another English class on the internet.
>>starting today, I will be starting another English lesson on the internet
for expectation of new class,
>>I have some expectations from this class.
i feel excitement.
>>I feel excited.
time flies very fast.
>>Time flies.
i like it. because i expect this september. i will work at this company until september.
>>I like it, because I am looking forward for September to come because I will be working in this company until September
but without my english skills improvement, i wouldn't do it.
>>But I need to improve my English skills for me to do it
so for my aim i will be endeavor in my best.
>>In order for me to reach my goals, I need to do my best.
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