good morning.~
학생이 쓴 원문
it's a FRIDAY. Actually i have to work until tomorrow noon. but that's ok. because my boss will be absent tomorrow, so i could study during saturday morning. ^ ^ and after work, i will go to Geo-je to meet my friend. i have some worrying about to go Geo-je . my ex boyfreind is living in Geo je. and i've heard that as soon as we broke up he met another girl. i wodered if i meet him by advanced in Geo je. but i tell to myself. 'don't worry and overcome it'. i could meet better person.!! have a enjoyable lunch time and see you at our class.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Oh, I am so sorry to hear that you need to go to work tomorrow. About your ex-boyfriend, yeah don’t worry about him. Just wait for the right person to come. Enjoy life and maybe you deserve someone better. Enjoy your lunch too and see you later.
Lei J
it's a FRIDAY.
>>correct
Actually i have to work until tomorrow noon.
>>correct
but that's ok.
>>correct
because my boss will be absent tomorrow, so i could study during saturday morning. ^ ^
>>correct
and after work, i will go to Geo-je to meet my friend.
>>correct
i have some worrying about to go Geo-je .
>>But I worry about going to geo-je
my ex boyfreind is living in Geo je.
>>my ex-boyfriend lives in Geo-je
and i've heard that as soon as we broke up he met another girl.
>>and I’ve heard that when we broke up, he met a new girl
i wodered if i meet him by advanced in Geo je.
>>I am wondering if there is any chance that I’ll bump into him in Geo-je
but i tell to myself. 'don't worry and overcome it'.
>>but I keep telling myself, I don’t have to worry and I come overcome this
i could meet better person.!!
>>correct
have a enjoyable lunch time and see you at our class.
>>enjoy your lunch and see you during our class
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