good morning.~

2010-04-09 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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it's a FRIDAY. Actually i have to work until tomorrow noon. but that's ok. because my boss will be absent tomorrow, so i could study during saturday morning. ^ ^ and after work, i will go to Geo-je to meet my friend. i have some worrying about to go Geo-je . my ex boyfreind is living in Geo je. and i've heard that as soon as we broke up he met another girl. i wodered if i meet him by advanced in Geo je. but i tell to myself. 'don't worry and overcome it'. i could meet better person.!! have a enjoyable lunch time and see you at our class.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Oh, I am so sorry to hear that you need to go to work tomorrow. About your ex-boyfriend, yeah don’t worry about him. Just wait for the right person to come. Enjoy life and maybe you deserve someone better. Enjoy your lunch too and see you later. Lei J   it's a FRIDAY. >>correct Actually i have to work until tomorrow noon. >>correct but that's ok. >>correct because my boss will be absent tomorrow, so i could study during saturday morning. ^ ^ >>correct and after work, i will go to Geo-je to meet my friend. >>correct i have some worrying about to go Geo-je . >>But I worry about going to geo-je my ex boyfreind is living in Geo je. >>my ex-boyfriend lives in Geo-je and i've heard that as soon as we broke up he met another girl. >>and I’ve heard that when we broke up, he met a new girl i wodered if i meet him by advanced in Geo je. >>I am wondering if there is any chance that I’ll bump into him in Geo-je but i tell to myself. 'don't worry and overcome it'. >>but I keep telling myself, I don’t have to worry and I come overcome this i could meet better person.!! >>correct have a enjoyable lunch time and see you at our class. >>enjoy your lunch and see you during our class

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